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I want, I want, I want by =danielcraggs:icondanielcraggs:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


I want the looks
and none of this face,
and sweet music to flow from my hands
with such gentle grace.

I want close friends
to help me off the ground,
and something to do
when there's nothing much around.

I want blue skies
to brighten my day,
and a kind helping hand
to show me the way.

I want inspiration
each day of my life,
and peace around me
with none of this strife.

I want to be strong
in everything I do,
and be there for others
and say that I'm true.

I want to be good-humoured
and have all of the charms,

but I need someone to call my own
and hold close in my arms.
©2004-2009 =danielcraggs
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"Realize what you really want. It stops you from chasing butterflies and puts you to work digging gold."

- William Moulton Marston
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~Mystic-Melody:iconMystic-Melody: Jan 23, 2004, 5:57:50 PM
Wow. That is..Amazing. ^^
=danielcraggs:icondanielcraggs: Jan 24, 2004, 3:42:36 AM
Why thankyee ^_^ :hug:

Dxx

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laughing stock
n.
1. Cattle with a sense of humour
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: Jan 24, 2004, 10:40:41 AM
WOW!!...this is great i share that feeling and wnat..

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Held by my own thoughts and fears,
how do I escape live through the years,
Solve all the problems, concure all the beasts,
set myself free, and practice what I preach.

~Lauren~
~jaded-now:iconjaded-now: Jan 24, 2004, 5:49:32 PM
aww dont worry, youre not the only one :hug:
~juliev6:iconjuliev6: Jan 24, 2004, 9:57:26 PM
well.. I wish I had all of that stuff too.. its not only a want.. its a wish and a dream. -although I already have enough inspiration (all you need is just to observe and think), and I have the best of the friends already-- but heck. the rest? actually makes my stomach ache.. (is that possible? hm.. I hope so, 'cause it does to mine)

I love this poem. expresses so much- I it written to expressed you, but it expresses me so much too- so +fav. :heart: Julie

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smile for me
=danielcraggs:icondanielcraggs: Jan 25, 2004, 3:57:48 AM
Thank you! You're forgetting you have the good looks, too :aww:

Dxx

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laughing stock
n.
1. Cattle with a sense of humour
~kshortt:iconkshortt: Jan 25, 2004, 3:57:24 PM
Wowee Dan! This is just beautiful! I really love it! :hug: I truly hope you find that someone.... :)

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~s-yl:icons-yl: Feb 2, 2004, 4:52:28 AM
very good work

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"I'm dancing in the ashes of the bridges I've burned."
~mouthful:iconmouthful: Feb 8, 2004, 3:30:16 PM
i feel you, i feel what your feelin, it feels like you've takin my feelins and sorted the puzzle- yet it leavings me thinkin what i want? sometimes what we want is not as important as what we need. its amazing words, its so beautiful- its sure +fav for me! look twice and ull be suprised.

:D kerby

ps: :hug:
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